The shard of redemption, p.17
The Shard of Redemption,
p.17
Neil’s eyes narrowed and darted as he examined the pages. Something in the arrangement of the symbols, their concentration in tight patterns. Strategic. He’d seen similar layouts in supply chain visualizations … or battlefield satellite intel. “These are feeding maps,” he said.
Penelope’s eyes widened, and she nodded. “Yes. I’ve always had to explain that, but you picked up on it.” A barely audible giggle, a mixture of anticipation and delight, escaped her.
Neil stilled, his head cocked to the side. His eyes narrowed in silent calculation, the muscles around them tightening. He looked at the clustered coordinates like a field report. “Feeding zones. Someone’s mapping intake. Not hunting. Harvesting.” He tapped one of the concentric circles on the page. “And someone’s regulating the flow.”
She met his eyes, her cheeks flushed, and her fingers tapped once against the paper. “You see it,” she said in a breathy tone. The dilation of her pupils and the hint of a smile deepened the intensity of her expression, then disappeared.
As the meaning of her reaction dawned on him, a knowing smile played on Neil’s lips. It was the wave of excitement she felt at finally being understood, quickly followed by a cold dread of the implications. A shiver of recognition trickled down his spine; he’d seen it before … somewhere.
Neil studied the margins of the next frame. Shifting lines. Distorted background. Embedded was the caption: The Veiled.
“Who is the Veiled?”
“They come at night,” said Penelope. “Drain people of their vitality. Leave them … hollow.” She thought for a moment. “They shimmer. Quantum shimmer. Sound distortion. Optical masking. They don’t show up in-frame. Only in the periphery. Here, let me show you.”
She crawled around the lacquer table and sat cross-legged beside him as she thumbed through pages of the sketchbook. She stopped at a page featuring a three-panel vertical sequence on the left side of the page, with a wide, horizontal panel anchoring the bottom.
Penelope pointed at the top panel, captioned, They shimmer. “What do you see?” she asked.
Neil examined the page.
The panel was different from the previous ones. The layout was shifted, tighter, more compressed. The margins darkened. Ink heavy. As if the air inside the panels had thickened.
Top frame: Ena alone, walking down a corridor. Lines crisp. Clean. Her figure fully inked, confident strokes. But the space behind her … Fractured.
A warped shadow where the wall should’ve been flat. A rippling distortion curling from the lower left corner. Faint motion lines, too faint, too intentional, radiating outward, like heat shimmer caught in still air.
Penelope leaned in, her voice low. “This is the first sign of them.”
Neil traced the edge of the distortion. “Who?”
“The Veiled,” she said.
He looked up. “The ones with the quantum shimmer.”
She nodded. “I heard a talk once about quantum computers. How time doesn’t quite behave near the qubit field. Things bleed. Ghost. Their presence creates distortion.”
Neil said nothing. His hand moved, turning the page with care.
A narrow vertical panel: Ena from above, walking down a windowless corridor lit by rhythmic pools of overhead light.
“She’s facing away,” said Neil. “And the light’s wrong.”
Penelope nodded. “She’s walking into something. But she doesn’t know it yet.”
Neil studied the panel. The perspective was subtly off; the left wall bowed outward, right side curving inward. Door handles repeated twice. No seams. The floor tile pattern warped. At first glance, the corridor seemed real. But the longer he looked, the more it bent.
“She’s inside a space that doesn’t want her there,” Neil said.
“And it’s already watching her,” Penelope added.
He tilted the sketchbook. In the upper corners of the panel, hairline spirals curled inward, like threads pulled from fabric. Ena’s outline began to ghost near the bottom, fading into the next frame. Sound bubbles, the tap, tap of her shoes, grew uneven, as if echo was being interfered with.
“Bleed lines,” Neil muttered. “Drawn into the sound.”
Penelope nodded slowly. “They don’t walk like people. They slide between frames.”
“You’re showing the moment before the threat enters. But the threat’s already changed the space.”
She tapped the edge of the panel. “Exactly.”
Next page.
Final panel: Wide, horizontal, low angle. Ena mid-step, seen from over her shoulder.
The corridor stretched ahead. Same lights. Same tile. But the world was wrong.
Fixtures flickered with doubled halos, like old CRT lag. Her shadow split: one forward, one off to the side. The wall to her left now had no doors. The one to her right had too many. The floor pattern looped. Too smooth. Too symmetrical. The subtle distortion wasn’t at the center; it was everywhere else.
Neil’s eyes narrowed. He didn’t speak for several seconds.
Then he said, “This isn’t a corridor. It’s a threshold.”
Penelope whispered, “The Veiled can’t be drawn directly. Only by what they change.”
He nodded slowly. “Predators that leave architecture warped instead of footprints.”
She tilted her head. “You’re the only person who’s said that. That it’s not them, it’s what they’ve touched.”
Neil’s mouth opened slightly, then closed. He looked again at the ripple along the wall. The matte-gray ovals stretched like slow lens flare. A shimmer that bent the panel without breaking it.
“Where did you learn to draw that shimmer?”
Penelope blinked. “I didn’t learn. I heard a talk on quantum distortion. Light and information behaving differently near advanced processors. I just imagined what it might look like. Like time stutters.”
Neil’s voice dropped. “Or like someone trying to hide a machine inside the fabric of space.”
His worried expression made her giggle. “It’s just a story.”
“No,” Neil said. “Not just.”
“Do you … think it’s good?” she asked softly.
“No,” said Neil. He turned the page. “It’s innovative. It’s your perspective. It’s not good.”
Penelope hung her head. “Thank you for being honest.”
“You miss my meaning,” Neil said, “It’s so stunning, it’s hard to find words that aren’t clichés.” He turned his attention back to the pages.
A splash panel: The Protector, broad, scarred, fierce, facing THE VEIL. Behind him, the Masked Man. They were whispering. Ena crouched behind a crumbling wall nearby, watching. The Masked Man turned. She ducked out of sight, but something passed between them.
“Did he see her?” Neil asked.
Penelope nodded.
The next panel exploded across the page.
A jagged wall of ink marked the edge of the descending shadow, swallowing light as it fell. The Protector stood braced at the threshold, shoulders squared, pivoting, turning their attention from Ena’s position. Around him, faceless figures surged, twisted silhouettes with bladelike limbs, mouths drawn in jagged black strokes that split where eyes should be.
His stance was defiant but battered. Blood streaked the side of his face, and one knee dipped, as if he’d taken a blow he couldn’t afford. Still, he didn’t fall. His eyes … Clear, human, anguished.
Behind him, the fog thickened, rising like a gloved hand ready to pull him under. And just before he vanished …
A close-up panel. Tight frame: The Protector’s face, twisted in anguish and rage. His mouth open, yelling over the ink storm. Caption, jagged and slanted across the border: Trust the Masked Man!
Neil stared at it, his eyes tracing the lines of the Protector’s face, anguish rendered in ink, pain that felt personal, as if it belonged to both of them.
He glanced at Penelope. “You lost someone like that.”
She didn’t speak.
The panel below showed Ena standing alone. The fog licked at her ankles. Her hand half raised, fingers curled as if reaching, but not far enough. Her eyes were wide, not with fear, but with memory. A knowing trying to surface.
The caption whispered in the gutter: But she never trusted anyone.
Another page. Ena running. A tattered map in her hand. And finally, the glass corridor. The Masked Man waiting. Neil turned to the next page. It was blank.
“That’s all I’ve finished,” Penelope whispered.
Neil closed the sketchbook and handed it to her. As he did, he spotted loose sketches poking out of the book.
“What are those?” he asked.
She pulled out the pages.
“This one … I don’t know,” she murmured, more to herself than to Neil. “It just … showed up one night. I think it came from a dream.”
The page was a full-panel spread. At first, it looked ordinary, a park bench, shadowy palm trees, four adults mid-conversation. His stomach dropped.
Something about the angle, the symmetry of the composition, crawled under his skin. He knew the layout. He’d seen it. In a photograph. In Katherine’s journal. March 17, 2016. But this was a mirror image from the girl’s perspective … from P’s perspective.
Neil tilted the page toward the light.
The girl on the bench in Katherine’s photo was not in the panel. She was the observer.
Neil’s heart pounded in his chest and pulsed in his temples as he examined the sketch. He pointed at the first man he recognized. Smyth. “Who is that man wearing the gloves?”
Penelope blinked. “He was the Protector’s enemy.”
“And who is the Protector?”
“That man.” Penelope pointed at the man to the right of Smyth.
Devlin. Athena’s husband. “And this man?” Neil asked.
“That’s the grandfather,” she said in a childlike voice.
“What’s the grandfather’s name?”
Penelope thought and shook her head. “It was a dream. They aren’t real people. But I think in my dream he was a minister.”
Neil didn’t look up. His thumb traced the lower corner of the panel. “And who is this woman?”
“That’s my mom. She …”
“She what?”
“Nothing.”
In the background, just barely visible … A woman with a camera. Katherine. The drawing had picked up the curve of her shoulders, the bag strap, the gleam of the lens. From the opposite angle. The same moment Katherine had captured, just … reversed.
Neil went still. The kind of still that comes right after the gun goes off, before you know if it hit you.
Jesus. You were there. You’re P.
Neil was shaken. Not on the outside. Not where anyone could see.
She was sitting inches away and had no idea what she’d just handed him. No idea she’d drawn the story of his pain, in ink, in code, in lines that matched the wreckage he carried.
You’re hers. And maybe … mine.
“Are you okay?” Penelope asked.
He nodded. “Tell me what you were thinking when you drew this scene.”
Penelope leaned over, touching the top edge of the paper. “I was thinking it might be an inspiration for the end of the story. The Protector. He’s angry. He’s telling the others they waited too long. That the Fades are coming.” She smiled nervously. “They’re like shadows. They erase people. Not just kill them. They erase them. They’re different from the Veiled.”
She shook her head. “It was a crazy dream. I don’t know why I drew this panel. I think I’d been drawing that last panel when the Veiled took the Protector. He was on my mind. The last thing I remember about the dream was something I think the Protector said to me.”
“You think? And what was that?” Neil asked.
“He said … "If you’re ever in trouble, look for the Masked Man."
“Why?” asked Neil.
Penelope gave a small shrug. “Because the Masked Man knows how to survive between stories.”
“How does it end?” asked Neil.
Penelope’s voice dropped. “I don’t know … not yet.”
She put the pages back into her sketchbook and was about to secure it with a ribbon when Neil pulled out his phone. “Do you mind if I take a picture of this page?”
A skeptical frown crept across her face. “Why do you want to do that?” she asked.
“It reminds me of a photograph I once saw,” he said, “something I’d like to remember.”
She hesitated, then nodded. Neil snapped the picture. Penelope secured the sketchbook with the ribbon and clipped her pen and pencil to it.
There was an uncomfortable silence. They’d had a connection, and now it was lost in their sketchbooks. Neil was unsure what to do, what to say, or how to feel. He finished his sake, then stuffed his sketchbook into his pocket. He watched Penelope fidget with her cardigan, finish her cider, and keep her eyes lowered to avoid looking at him. Her lips pressed together, then parted slightly as if she wanted to speak but thought better of it. She crossed her arms and clutched the sleeves of her cardigan. Then she blew out a sigh and leaned forward.
“Kozo told me you’re a private detective.”
“Yes, I am.” Neil poured more sake into his glass and sat back, watching her.
Penelope started to speak, then stopped, giving a tiny shake of the head. She looked down and swallowed, then inhaled deeply. “I don’t know where my mother is, and … I was just … wondering if … maybe …”
“Ahh!” said Octavia as she entered the room, flanked by Kozo and another man, Fuji Yuu, who was impeccably dressed and unmistakably amused, holding a bucket of KFC chicken in one hand and a case of Yebisue Premium beer in the other. “The two artists have found each other.”
“Mr. Ames,” Fuji said smoothly. “Merii Kurisumasu.”
With a slow nod, Neil’s lips tightened as he weighed his options and decided to let his silence speak for itself. The last time he’d seen Fuji was at a funeral home in Destiny Pointe; the air had hung heavy with the scent of lilies as he confronted Miyako Yuu, Fuji’s sister, about her involvement in three murders. Her defiance had been palpable as she stood at the head of her deceased husband’s coffin, a man who had taken his own life to protect her.
“Kozo, would you please take the beer and chicken to the table?” Octavia asked as she broke the silence with a broad smile. “Let’s all enjoy Christmas Eve and marvel at the beauty of my Christmas tree.”
Fuji glanced at Penelope’s sketchbook.
“She’s a great artist,” proclaimed Kozo as he reentered the room to escort her to the table. “Her manga is going to make her famous.”
Her cheeks flushed. “The work isn’t complete,” she said, looking crossly at Kozo.
Fuji gave a small smile. “Isn’t that true of all art?”
“No,” said Neil. “Just the dangerous kind.”
Chapter 29
The dining room glowed softly, the paper lanterns casting a welcoming, warm light on the walls. The pine Christmas tree stood in the corner and glittered with lacquer-red ornaments and gold-threaded hand-folded paper cranes, each one a precise sculpture. Octavia had gone all in: crystal-cut glass bulbs, a flickering strand of tiny lights powered by solar cells, and an angel fashioned out of black silk and silver wire. It was beautiful. Spectacular, even. But it felt, to Neil, less like a symbol of warmth and more like a shrine, something sacred and foreign, elevated beyond reach.
Her Japanese guests seemed to agree. They approached the tree with reverence, bowing slightly, hands at their sides, as if paying respects. A perfect ring of hand-wrapped gifts was displayed beneath the tree, each one folded with origami precision, tied with indigo cord, and sealed with wax.
At the far end of the round table, Neil sat beside Penelope, who hadn’t spoken since the miso soup had been cleared. Across from them, Octavia kept the conversation buoyant, flanked by her physical therapist, a tall woman with elegant posture and a dry wit, and Fuji Yuu, who was already three steps into charming the music staff with sly quips about licensing rights and the jazz renaissance.
The Sacred Tree managers, two in subdued suits, one in a high-collared dress with mud-colored pearls, spoke little but were clearly intrigued by Fuji.
Neil watched as Fuji charmed them all: Octavia, the Yuu International staff, even the physical therapist. Fuji has that gift: easy manners, a low voice, the kind of face that doesn’t ask for trust, just collects it.
But it wasn’t the table banter that caught Neil’s attention.
It was the discreet words passed between Fuji and Kozo, low and lean, meant for no one else. He didn’t catch the content, just the cadence: controlled, intentional. Like a message slipped under a door.
Kozo gave a small, deliberate nod in reply. Not just polite. The kind of nod that closes a deal without needing a signature.
Neil leaned back and let the moment pass. Outwardly, at least. Internally, it filed itself.
He’d seen that kind of nod before: on airstrips, in hospital hallways, behind closed doors where people thought no one was watching. It wasn’t a yes. It was an acknowledgment. A burden accepted.
Fuji turned back to the table, smiling as if nothing had happened. Octavia laughed at something he said, and Neil felt it, an itch behind the ribs, sharp as a splinter.
Fuji was saying all the right things. That was what worried him.
I wonder if Murakami is the Yuu brother I should be concerned about.
The table was lively in every quadrant but one. Penelope’s chopsticks paused halfway to her mouth. She set them down and reached for her tea instead. Her eyes didn’t meet Neil’s.
He cleared his throat. “The salmon’s good.”
She nodded, polite. “Very.”
They returned to silence.
A few more minutes passed, conversation rising and falling like jazz phrasing across the table, before Penelope leaned closer, her voice just above a whisper.
“Can we forget what I said before? About … her?”
