Genesis earth, p.23

  Genesis Earth, p.23

Genesis Earth
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  It still needed a lot of work, though. I went through one major revision that spring and another in the summer. Each time, my first readers told me in no uncertain terms that it needed work, and their frank criticism was immensely helpful, if sometimes a little harsh. By the end of summer 2009, I felt I had something I could send to New York.

  Over the course of the next year, I sent the manuscript out to dozens of agents and editors. In total, Genesis Earth accrued 18 form rejections, 2 personalized rejections, 1 rejection after a request for a partial manuscript, 1 rejection after a request for the full manuscript, and 8 no responses. I’d already moved on to other projects, so I wasn’t too discouraged by all this, but I’ll admit it was a difficult process. To make the book better, I revised it two more times and sent it out to another batch of first readers for critique. Their responses were generally positive, so I knew I was going in the right direction.

  In the fall of 2010, a friend sent me a link to Joe Konrath’s blog post titled “You Should Self-Publish.” It completely blew my mind—everything he said was totally against the mainstream publishing paradigm, and yet it made surprising sense. Soon afterward, I discovered Dean Wesley Smith’s blog and Kristine Katherine Rusch’s “The Business Rusch” series, and I realized that publishing was in the midst of a revolution. Far from being frightened, the rapid pace of change thrilled and excited me. I decided to enter the indie publishing waters with a few of my short stories, mostly just to learn the new system and find out if it was something I could do.

  At the same time, I submitted Genesis Earth to the 2011 Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award contest. To my delight, it made the first and second cut, becoming one of 250 novels to go on to the quarter-finals in the Young Adult category. Both of the Amazon expert reviewers had a lot of positive things to say about it—one of them even asked whether the book was already available, because she wanted to finish it. I got a similar response from friends and friends of friends who read the free 5,000 word excerpt.

  The day the semi-finalists were announced, I was a nervous wreck. I felt I had a decent chance of winning, which only made me more nervous. Sadly, it didn’t make the cut. Of course I was disappointed, but if that was all that had happened, it wouldn’t have really affected me. However, the review from Publisher’s Weekly got a little under my skin:

  What begins as a muted space opera unspools into a slow-moving and clumsy adventure as Michael and Terra are sent on an 80-year, history-making mission to look for life on the other side of a wormhole. As Michael and Terra drift through space, Terra is described as possibly having a “schizoid and paranoid personality disorder,” though this potentially crucial detail never leads anywhere. Eventually, another spaceship is encountered, but this also goes nowhere. Later, Michael gains access to yet another spaceship where he encounters an artificial intelligence that attempts to blast him back to Earth. However, Terra manages to save him. Eventually, the story does make an attempt to find direction and purpose, but the plot remains murky, with hints of an evolution-creation collision that never quite materializes. Whatever the author was trying to get at here is a mystery.

  When I read that, something inside of me clicked, and I knew that I had to go indie. With so many conflicting signals from New York, I had to get Genesis Earth out to the readers directly, to let them decide whether it’s a story of any worth.

  And that’s where you enter into this story. No book truly comes to life until it is read, so thank you for bringing life to this one. I hope you enjoyed it, and if you did, I hope you’ll check out my other books as well. My goal is to publish at least two novels per year, not including novellas and short stories. As for sequels to Genesis Earth, I plan to eventually expand it into a trilogy, and I’ve already picked out the titles for the next two books: Edenfall and The Stars of Redemption.

  If you would like to help me out, the best thing you could do is post a review or tell a friend. Feel free to check out my other books too, and my writing blog, One Thousand and One Parsecs (onelowerlight.com/writing). I update it pretty regularly, and you can find information about my other books. On the sidebar, you can also sign up for my email list, where I share updates about my new releases and special offers with my fans. If for any reason you want to contact me directly, feel free to shoot me an email at joseph.vasicek@gmail.com. I’m also on Twitter (@onelowerlight), Goodreads, and Wattpad.

  Once again, thank you for reading my book! I hope the story has touched you in some way—it certainly has touched me. Until next time, take care, and thanks for reading!

  Acknowledgments

  They say that writing is a solitary art, but while that may be true for some books, it certainly wasn’t true with this one. First off, I would like to thank my parents for being so supportive, and giving me a quality education that helped me to practice and hone my writing skills. I would also like to thank Brandon Sanderson for teaching such an awesome writing class at BYU, and Professor Jay Goodliffe from the BYU Political Science Department; his PL SC 310 methodology class influenced this book quite strongly, believe it or not. I would also like to thank my alpha readers: Cavan Helps, Ben Hardin, Steve Dethloff, Mykle Law, Gini Richards, Aneeka, Liel Boyce, Charlie Holmberg, Cassandra Lawyer, and Sara Forsyth; my beta readers: Emily Debenhaum, Stephen Haskin, Jason Housely, Josh Leavitt, Spencer Scoville, and David Stephenson; and my later test readers: Kristin Seibert, Logan Kearsley, and Laura Christensen. Thank you so much for all of your feedback and criticism; you provided an invaluable help in crafting this book and making this story take shape. Thank you!

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  Joe Vasicek, Genesis Earth

 


 

 
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