Breaking point book 10 o.., p.23
BREAKING POINT: Book 10 of the WW1 Alternate Series,
p.23
“An artillery truck,” Stark murmured. “Heading the wrong direction.” “Or they think the road is still safe,” Willi said. Rommel dismounted without a sound. “We’ll fix that mistake,” he smiled wolfishly.
The men slid from their saddles and led the horses behind a ragged hedgerow, tying reins to field posts. Rommel and Stark crawled up the slope, bellies pressed to the dirt, until the entire scene unfolded before them: a lumbering column of two British artillery trucks, their canvas flaps billowing as they rumbled forward. The first probably was laden with ammunition; the last pulled a massive field howitzer. A small escort of six Tommies walked beside the lead vehicle, rifles slung casually, oblivious.
“They’ve outrun their infantry,” Reinhardt said, arriving beside them. “Probably missed a rendezvous in the dark.” “Stupid blokes,” said Young Willi, having crawled beside them. His 'bloke' reference was also meant to be a joke about the British (who often say 'blokes'), and the two others smiled at the jest.
Rommel’s eyes narrowed. He tapped Stark’s shoulder. “Get the mines.” Two of the men crept back to their saddlebags and retrieved the small, box-shaped Geballte Ladung mines, which were crude but deadly on narrow roads. In total silence, Stark and Mertens crawled forward through a shallow ditch, placing the charges across the hard-packed earth where the convoy’s wheels would pass.
Reinhardt checked his watch. The trucks were closing fast. “Set them,” Rommel whispered. The fuses were primed in seconds. The raiders withdrew to a patch of broken earth behind a fallen oak, rifles ready, breaths held.
Oblivious to the threat, the British lead truck drove right over them a minute later. The night exploded. A blinding white flash ripped the darkness apart as the lead truck rolled squarely over the first mine. The entire chassis vaulted upward in a spray of metal and fire, the engine block hurled to the side like a kicked can. Screams erupted as the escort soldiers dove for cover, but it was too late. The second mine detonated beneath the trailing axle, flipping the wrecked vehicle on its side.
“Go!” Rommel barked. His men rose as one from the shadows, rifles cracking. Stark cut down the first British gunner trying to leap from the troop bed. Reinhardt’s shot shattered a lamp, plunging the scene into near-blackness again, save for the burning truck. Willi and Klaus opened fire on the scrambling escort, their silhouettes dancing in the flickering light. The Tommies fired back wildly, but the Germans had surprise, darkness, and position. In less than twenty seconds, every man of the escort was down.
“Reload and sweep!” Rommel ordered. They moved quickly through the smoke and steam, checking bodies for movement, stripping rifles and ammunition to deny the enemy anything usable. The howitzer crew, stunned by the blast ahead, tried to detach the limber, but Stark sent a bullet through the cab, killing the driver, ending the attempted unlimbering entirely as the rest scattered in the night, running for their lives. The five Germans knew that those Brits were out of the fight and let them escape. They’d come to make some mischief, not kill panicked enemies. The gun and the trucks were the prize. Rommel approached the heavy howitzer, rifle at the ready in case there were other soldiers in the vicinity, but nothing moved apart from the first destroyed truck and the second idle one, with the dead driver at the wheel. “Stark, spike it.”
Theo grinned, knelt, and rammed a metal spike deep into the breech mechanism. Reinhard smashed the elevation wheel with a rifle butt, ensuring the weapon could not be fired even if recovered. By the time they finished, the gun was nothing more than a hunk of iron.
“Mount up,” Rommel said. “We’re done here.” They withdrew swiftly, melting back into the darkness where their horses waited. The burning truck cast an eerie glow behind them as they mounted. Rommel allowed himself a quiet, satisfied breath. “Good work,” he said to his men. “By sunrise, the British will wonder where their artillery went.”
The men rode back toward the trenches, tired smiles on their faces. They were mud-stained, hungry, but victorious. Behind them, the ruined howitzer lay twisted and silent, a testament to what six determined raiders could do under the cover of a black, thunderous night.
Rommel thought that this was a fitting moment before the frontline fixed itself, and the boredom of trench life set in once more.
The Battle for Chunuk Bair Part 1
The Cape Helles breakthrough, May 4th, 1916
“Sir,” said Izli Bey, the Colonel who was acting as second-in-command for Esat Pasha, the commander of the Ottoman 2nd Corps and also of all the southern defenses in Cape Helles. A powerful explosion rocked the top of the trench bunker, dropping dust and earth from the fortified ceiling. Fortified was a big word for saying the place was protected by steel plates and planking and covered with earth. All was fine unless the Entente guns slammed a shell right on top of it.
Esat Pasha sat hunched over the rough wooden table that served as his command desk, the low ceiling of the dugout pressing down on him like a physical weight. The bunker was little more than a reinforced hole in the earth, with timber beams sagging under the strain of weeks of artillery pounding, burlap sandbags stuffed into every gap, dust drifting constantly from the overhead planks each time a British shell struck somewhere nearby. A lantern flickered weakly beside him, its flame trembling with every concussion from above, casting long, wavering shadows across maps pinned to the dirt walls. “Yes, say your piece, Colonel,” answered Esat Pasha, busy writing up another order for a runner. “The Serbian soldiers have broken through the gully just south of our position, and the damned Americans have done the same on our left flank. The entire position is crumbling!”
The air was dusty from the constant pounding, thick with the smell of damp earth, sweat, and the lingering sting of cordite carried in by aides rushing back and forth. Esat Pasha’s uniform was dusted a dull gray from the constant shaking of the bunker; fine powder coated his shoulders and the creases of his collar. His normally immaculate beard was streaked with the same grime, giving him the look of a man carved out of the very hillside he defended. He was tired – he hadn't slept in a full day, too busy, and overwhelmed because of the enemy’s numbers.
Around him, the command post pulsed with tense activity. A telegraph operator sat tucked into a corner alcove, tapping frantic updates from the shoreline batteries. An aide-de-camp knelt beside an open crate of signal flags, ready to sprint outside the moment the shelling eased enough to risk his life. Two junior officers hovered near a pinned operations map, their fingers shaking slightly as they traced the positions of battered Ottoman regiments along the Cape Helles line. A runner burst in from the trench entrance, ducking instinctively as clods of earth rained down from another explosion overhead; he handed Esat Pasha a message folded and mottled with dirt.
Despite the chaos, Esat Pasha remained composed, trying to digest his second-in-command’s news. His eyes were sharp, dark, and deeply set as he turned back to study the map with unwavering focus. Outside, the bombardment intensified, each detonation sending a tremor through the walls, making the lantern sway dangerously. Dust sifted down in thin veils, settling on his maps like ashes.
But his voice, when he finally spoke, was steady, quiet but firm, the kind of voice that steadied frightened men and held collapsing lines together. “This is where they must be stopped,” he said, tapping a finger on the ridge overlooking V Beach. “No matter how hard they strike, the line...” The Ottoman general was interrupted by a wave of loud bangs and the ground rocking severely.
Outside, another shell screamed down, close, too close, shaking the entire bunker. The officers flinched, and Colonel Izli Bey strode into a cloud of smoke and dust from the outside. Unfortunately for Esat and the Ottomans in general, his orders would never leave the bunker, as just then another shell slammed into the ground, but this time right on top of the thinly protected bunker. The resulting explosion vaporized everything inside, including the commander, his men, and staff.
(…)
From high above Cape Helles, the battlefield looked like a vast brawl of fire, death, smoke, and desperation. Smoke rolled in thick, dirty columns, trenches collapsed under shell bursts from both battleship guns and heavy howitzers on the beaches below, and entire ridgelines flickered with the relentless strobe of gunfire. Dawn had barely broken, yet the land already burned with the light of a thousand explosions. The Entente assault came not as a thin, exhausted expeditionary force, but as an overwhelming tide of nearly 75,000 men driving forward at once, a human wave too massive for the battered Ottoman lines to absorb.
From the bird’s-eye view, the assault unfolded like a colossal, coordinated machine. On the far left flank, the 40,000 Serbian veterans, hardened by years of Balkan warfare and motivated by their hatred of anything Turkish, surged up the slopes in tight, wedge-shaped formations, fanning out as they neared the first trench lines. Their rifles flashed in disciplined volleys, bayonets glinting faintly in the half-light as they advanced through gaps blasted open by naval guns. Dust geysers erupted behind them as shrapnel shells burst overhead, yet the formations barely wavered; they stormed through Ottoman parapets like a rising flood.
To the right, the 4th American Division, fresh, well-equipped, and burning with youthful aggression, moved with an almost shocking speed. Their columns split into wide attack lanes, one sweeping along the shoreline, the other pushing inland through vineyards shattered into splinters. From above, they looked like green ribbons in khaki lines winding upward, leaving dark trails of smoke where their machine-gun platoons set up and opened fire. When Ottoman strongpoints resisted, American field guns were hauled by hand up the steep approaches, firing point-blank into bunkers until the defenses caved in.
Between these two tidal forces, the French and British brigades advanced, their tricolors and Union Jacks fluttering somewhere below the smoke. French Senegalese Tirailleurs pushed forward in powerful thrusts, their officers’ whistles rising faintly even amid the thunder of battle. British bluejackets and infantry brigades seized the last Ottoman gun pits overlooking V and W Beaches, their bayonets flashing as they rolled over and through trench after trench. In the overhead view, they appeared as a solid block of movement, like a dense, unstoppable, living wall of men and steel.
As the Entente’s three great wings advanced, the Ottoman line buckled visibly. Trenches collapsed inward like ruptured veins, earthworks disintegrating under the weight of shells and close-quarters combat. Small pockets of Turkish defenders could be seen fighting with desperate tenacity, rifles cracking upward at the passing shapes above, machine guns chattering until their barrels glowed red. But they were swallowed by the tide. One trench, then the next, then the entire secondary positions were washed away under waves of attackers who seemed to come from every direction.
The Ottomans fell back up the ridges in scattered knots, firing as they retreated, silhouetted briefly by explosions that made their shadows stretch across the ground like fleeing ghosts. Now-dead Esat Pasha’s battered Cape Helles defenders were now in full collapse, fighting bravely, but drowning beneath impossible numbers. From above, their withdrawal looked chaotic and jagged, a series of broken lines bending backward, then snapping altogether as Serbian and American units cut through the gaps.
By mid-morning, the Entente spearheads had surged past the high ground above the beaches, pouring over the ridgeline like water cresting a dam. Dust clouds rose in towering plumes as artillery teams dragged light guns forward to fire at new targets to the north. The Serbians pushed hardest toward Achi Baba, while the Americans angled northeast toward the peninsula's central spine.
And above it all, the camera would sweep toward the distant heights of Chunuk Bair, where Mustapha Kemal had decided to prepare his stronghold in anticipation of this very disaster.
From high above, the peninsula now resembled a gigantic, shifting battlefield map come alive: columns of Allied troops snaking inland, Ottoman defenders streaming northward, trails of smoke marking every point where resistance held for a moment before being swallowed. The Entente breakthrough was not merely a breach; it was a rolling, violent transformation of the entire southern peninsula.
The advance was accelerating. The road to Chunuk Bair was opening. And Kemal, still unaware of the scale of the disaster unfolding, but suspecting it was coming, was about to face a storm unlike anything the peninsula had seen.
Retreat
4th Russian Hussars, May 3rd, 1916
Dimitri Fedorov, a Private in the 4th Russian Hussars Division, tried to concentrate on putting one foot after the other as he moved through deep pine forest beside a large railroad track. The ambient noise around him was filled with clicking sounds and feet pounding the ground. Once in a while, a lone horseman went by. Most of the soldiers had their shoulders hunched forward, either in discouragement or in tiredness.
The Russian Army was retreating eastward toward Zhytomyr, the next supposed hard point where the troops were supposed to rally and defend the land. There, it was said, supplies, food, ammo, and more troops awaited them and promised their salvation.
Dimitri, who had been in the military for a while now, didn’t believe any part of it. He knew that the only thing they would find in Zhitomyr would be more hardships, stupid officers, and perhaps some food and ammo.
The defeat on the Kovel-Lutsk-Ostrog defensive line at the hands of the Austro-Hungarians was now behind him. The fight for Ostrog, during which he’d personally been involved, ended up in Brusilov ordering the troops to retire east before getting smashed to bits and encircled.
Besides Dimitri, Sergeant Sergei Churin walked, also in silence, while Alexander Matvichuk and Victor Orban argued about the virtues of the Mannlicher K.U.K. rifle against the Mosin-Nagant. He shook his head in amazement, not believing these two kept morale. He figured they must have found some food and that they were not as hungry as he was.
(…)
The retreat toward Kiev unfolded like a long, slow unspooling of a broken army. It was an exodus stretching mile after mile through the pine and birch forests that bordered the Kiev-Kovel rail line. By late April 1916, and then early May, the Russian front in Volhynia had ruptured under relentless German and Austro-Hungarian pressure: the Kovel-Lutsk-Ostroh Defensive Line had not merely bent; it had folded inward and been outflanked, forcing entire corps to abandon positions they had bled to hold only days before. Now the survivors marched eastward, boots sinking in thawing mud, rifles slung like burdens rather than weapons of war.
Frost still clung to the shaded side of the trees, and the birch bark gleamed faintly under the pale morning light. The forest swallowed sound strangely, muffling the roar of the distant guns, amplifying the crunch of tired feet, making conversations feel whispered even when spoken aloud. Every now and then, a locomotive groaned past on the nearby rail line, hauling wounded or artillery pieces toward Kiev, but just as often the railcars were empty, burned out, or derailed in the mad scramble to evacuate.
Dimitri trudged in silence with Churin, their greatcoats grey with dust, their eyes hollow from too many nights sleeping in the open. Behind them stretched what remained of the regiment. Numbers that once filled two battalions were now reduced to a few ragged companies. The standard-bearer no longer carried a flag; it had been torn to bind wounds and cover the dead.
Ahead, a group of soldiers walked in a loose cluster, muttering among themselves. Dimitri caught fragments as the wind shifted. “…the officers did this … they knew the line was collapsing …” “… if the Germans catch us, they’ll feed us to the guns …” “…the men in Kiev shot theirs, why shouldn’t we?”
That last comment made Dimitri stiffen. The revolution or any general uprising against the elites and officers had not yet come, but its early sparks had begun to crackle along the front. He didn’t like to talk about it or think about it, since he considered himself a loyal subject of the sacred Tsar, but news of mutinous whispers had traveled quickly. There were reports of sailors creating trouble in Kronstadt, workers striking in Moscow, and political agitators slipping through the ranks with pamphlets tucked under their tunics. Churin spat into the dirt. “Idiots,” he muttered. “Shoot officers? And then what? Who leads us? Who gets us home?”
Manvitchuk shook his head, his breath forming a small fog. “They think the Tsar will suddenly notice them if they make a scene. All he’ll notice is the firing squad.” As he listened to their discussion, Dimitri said nothing. He understood the anger, even if he rejected its direction. The retreat had been a chaos of lost units, of missing supply trains, and stupid officers arguing over maps that no longer represented reality. They had been told to hold. Then told to withdraw. Then told to counterattack. Men had died for nothing on those fields near Ostrog. Some broke; others simply walked away into the forest, throwing their rifles into the marshes to lighten the load.
Every day, desertions grew. At dawn, they found two more men gone. At noon, another pair drifted off the column and vanished among the pines. No one bothered to call after them anymore. The birch forest thinned as the column neared the rail line again. To their right, a small station, its sign half-charred, leaned drunkenly over the track. Carriages sat abandoned on a siding, doors open, crates spilled across the gravel. Farther up the line, smoke rose from a hastily repaired locomotive preparing to carry senior staff and medical teams toward Zhitomyr.
“Zhitomyr,” Orban said, pointing with his chin. “They say that’s where the army will make its stand next.” “Or fall apart completely,” Churin grumbled.
But Dimitri looked at the rail line and felt a faint ember of purpose. If Zhitomyr still held, if the army could regroup there, perhaps they had not lost everything yet. The forest wind carried the distant boom of German artillery, muffled but insistent, reminding them that the enemy was not far behind.
They marched on, a dwindling line of weary men slipping between birch trunks and rail embankments, their future uncertain but their steps stubbornly carrying them toward Kiev, toward Zhitomyr, and toward whatever remained of the Russian Army.
